It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree
Thanks to the tremendous revolution in technology, transportation and other related fields, people have more opportunities to explore more areas. Some individuals think that they visit other places to access more knowledge about things other than studying from books, film, and the internet. In my opinion, I think that both sources of information have their own benefits.
It is beneficial for learners to take a tour to other countries whose culture they want to study. To begin, people can acquire more knowledge outside their country's territory . As the world becomes more modernized, individuals want to get more information about the cultures of different countries, which leads them to choose international tourism.For example, scientists majoring in Africa geography are required to travel to the Sahara desert, South Africa, and other locations to conduct research on weather, animals, soil, and other topics. Furthermore, people cannot gain hands-on experience by staying at home and reading online reviews. If people can get directly exposed to the culture they are curious about, they can have their own experiences and assessments without relying on others’ subjective standpoints.
However, there are numerous sources from which people can learn about a place's culture and get advantages from them without visiting. Firstly, reading books is also an affordable way for people who can not pay for a tour to know the outside world. The cost of the plane ticket normally ranges from $500 to $1000 per seat to travel to other nations, while individuals can stay at home and watch all the reputative architectures on youtube at a cost-effective budget. Moreover, Individuals can learn anything by simply looking it up on the internet and absorbing the information that they desire.It is not only the money but also the time people can save. For instance, if a person wishes to learn more about Vietnamese culture, they can do so by conducting an online search,watching documentaries,etc without having to travel to the location where it is being illustrated.
In conclusion, people have a variety of options when it comes to gaining more knowledge about one country's culture. Whether it is in real-time or through the film,books and so on, both deliver the benefits depending on the individual’s need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31880108992 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97947055725 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561307901907 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4776111023 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294425540412 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986243856906 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626694142126 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169621747736 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760238748183 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.