Task 2: Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, commercial advertising has become more prevalent to the global economy. From my perspective,this trend could have both positive and negative consequences.
On the one hand, the rise of advertising can bring some advantages. To begin with, it can propagate the messages involved in products or services to reach potential customers. Advertising is an important part of modern business because it allows companies to inform customers about their products and services. As a result, customers are kept informed about newly launched products and buy them,increasing the sales for business. In addition, it also provides jobs for artists, painters, and copywriters who create logos or brand awareness for businesses or prepare advertisement content.
On the other hand, there are some exaggerated disadvantages of advertising. Firstly, the larger the advertising expense, the higher the product's price. It's possible that the reason is because the selling price includes the expense of advertising. As a result, the promoted products may be more expensive than they should be. Secondly, clients' personal information cannot be safely protected, particularly when it comes to online advertising. For example, some technology behemoths like Facebook and Google can sell your data, such as your browsing history or emails, to electronic commerce corporations without your permission. In consequence, many people have been annoyed by strange firms by spam calls.
In conclusion, the large-scale expansion of advertising, which is necessary but must be regulated, can bring both benefits and drawbacks to consumers
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
... the global economy. From my perspective,this trend could have both positive and nega...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
...out newly launched products and buy them,increasing the sales for business. In addition, it...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...cts price. Its possible that the reason is because the selling price includes the expense ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th benefits and drawbacks to consumers
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73140495868 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16129746353 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6240764016 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117136897122 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393341954453 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607877741007 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829951656022 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931725230298 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
... the global economy. From my perspective,this trend could have both positive and nega...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
...out newly launched products and buy them,increasing the sales for business. In addition, it...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...cts price. Its possible that the reason is because the selling price includes the expense ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th benefits and drawbacks to consumers
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73140495868 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16129746353 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6240764016 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117136897122 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393341954453 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607877741007 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829951656022 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931725230298 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.