Task 2: Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and dealing with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is obvious that discovering innovative methods of medicine and cures is critical to eliminate harmful illness and extend human's life. The question of who should pay for these studies: the government, the private companies, or individuals is still a controversial topic.In my opinion, I assume that all the three mentioned groups should equally invest for these studies .
There are several reasons why it can be argued that the government should spend money on tackling the causes of diseases. The administration can give affordable prices for residents when they take medical treatment. Take the Vietnam government as an example, during the pandamic of covid-19, it is important for everyone to have vaccines but some citizens were not able to have it because of the costly price, so the government decided to give it free. Moreover, the government can share techniques with other organizations for overall better performance. British scientists are the first one successful in creating the vaccines, then they share the research with other countries to help them make their own vaccines.
It is more flexible for the private companies to manage and invest in medical study since these agencies do not require many documents and time to get accepted like the government. However, if private companies fund medical research, patients will have to pay higher prices for medications and treatments. Because research necessitates that the funders cover a variety of costs, such as purchasing equipment or hiring staff. Besides, without an individual's participation, hardly could the study be implemented flourishingly.By helping burden the government, especially the wealthy ones,they can receive the benefits from the new treatments. As a result, when there is a new type of sickness, citizens can use these medicines to cure them when they get sick.
In conclusion, three organizations should invest equally in these studies and prevention of epidemic vigor illnesses in order to make better medical systems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44904458599 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96101485466 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5372168122 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272910562824 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877755135524 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479647513754 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143782573204 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059372083357 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.