It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree.
Many people claim that we can learn about other cultures through books, movies and the internet instead of visiting other places. While it is true that there are much information we can acquire from books, films and the Internet, I would argue that it is essential for us to go to different destinations in order to learn about cultures.
To begin with, books, films and the Internet are useful sources for us to obtain information about cultures. Firstly, since there is much information in these kinds of media, people can acquire a firm grasp about a specific topic by learning from these sources. For example, watching documentaries about nature could allow viewers to get knowledge about environment habitat. As a result, they would find out how other species live. Secondly, the breakthrough in storing and providing information of these types of media. For example, Internet users can search for information easily by using Google. Therefore, people could save a great amount of time and money. This could help them to stay at home and still broaden their horizons.
However, I believe one need to travel if we want to learn about the culture of other people around the world. First, the culture of countries is different. For instance, in Scotland, men usually wear skirts as a tradition. As a result, tourists could have valuable experiences and unforgettable memories when travelling. A telling example is that many visitors watch the show of transgender models in Thailand and claim that they understand the difficulties of these people. This could positively affect their attitude towards cultural diversity. Additionally, due to numerous languages in the world such as German or French, travellers have chance to learn new foreign languages. For example, tourists have to communicate with receptionists or local citizens. Therefore, they could overcome language barriers and make friend with locals.
In conclusion, it is true that we can obtain information from books, films and the internet, I believe it is also necessary to travel and learn the culture of other countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2100591716 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77707286163 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541420118343 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1251409493 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.05 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324100795918 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908637051713 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126277447643 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272322350046 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147051883299 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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