It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.
Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime?
What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
On the rate of rising in crime commitment by youngsters recently has aroused a large - scale concern on the original influence. there have been debates on the complication and predict on the fact that modernization in society is the most practical acquiesce. From my perspective, modern society is the temporary on the great conviction as there are remaining factors that are compulsorily pointed out and I will demonstrate by these following convincing aspects.
Admittedly, modernization has exerted the substantial impact on the children's development, where outbreak of lure from contemporary era has extensively potential to intercept the health growth by hypnotizing them to absorb in, for instance, violence and discipline behaviors which are fundamental for crime's participation. A good case in the point would be uncontrollable access to inappropriate webs when takes tremendous proportion of the commitment. Nonetheless, in parallel of thriving modern trending in society means the height of civilisation is neutralising the delinquencies to curb. As a result, modernization can not be claimed for the major impact as it took a slight component in the crisis.
On the other hand, lack of parent's supervision as a deterrent against children's outburst seems to be the root of this issue. Although there are more relevant assumptions to be considered such as unstable community's intellect or individual's tendencies toward approaching crime, parents are priory expected to educate them to obscure as well as raise the knowledge of how to reject from luring and be aware of the detrimental effect upon their lives. In starkly contrast fact, struggling with stabilizing the finance as the principal barrier along with family conditions like divorce, sepreations,.. etc has prevented them from spending exclusive time contributing on evolving their offsprings.
From the indications above, we can conclude the addresses. First, socialists should propaganda the efficient method of raising to parents. For partial reason, government and authorities are convinced to adjust the community's intellect, provide people concrete security and establish better - improved education.
From what discuss above, we may draw the conclusion that it is high time eradication must be procceded. By the mentioned solutions I regarded, there will be exponential decrease on the rate of juvenile offences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, nonetheless, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6675900277 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26217097079 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637119113573 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7974159016 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.875 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133149326468 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375630317178 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351150474807 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645332397377 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327073715137 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.