Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
The entertainment industry is increasingly becoming popular around the world and usage of new technology in this field has changed it lot. I do not agree with the argument that the use of technology will reduce the creativity of the people. I will prove my stand with valid arguments in this essay.
There are several reasons of my opinion. First and foremost one is, people are becoming more creative by applying technology in a leisure industry like cinema. They can put their ideas and imaginations in movies through different software and devices. To illustrate, there are number of Hollywood as well as Bollywood movies depict the creative thinking of the writer which can not be executed without the use of new technology. The another argue is, in the past, people usually were confined to limited activities. For example, having chat with friends, watching movie in theater, and so forth, but today leisure activities have no bounds, even we do not need to go out for entertainment, people can spend free time by watching countless programmes on both, the national and international channels.
Furthermore, theme parks, kids game zones, and art galleries are using different tech-related equipment and devices to enhance the creativity of the youth. For instance, there are various art galleries which conduct digital painting events for visitors to showcase and discover their creative talent. In addition, according to research, due to the availability of technologically innovative games, children now familiar with a lot of games than in the past. So, it helps to increase the learning and creative ability of children.
In conclusion, after analyzing the situation, it is not hard to see that application of technology in the leisure industry has enhanced the creativity and artistic ability among people around the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25084745763 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89884225372 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9186843319 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153433145243 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492480054275 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504397835163 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907095185754 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351662012094 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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