Life in the 21st century is better compared to life in the previous century. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The 21st century has brought people’s life in more sophisticated technologies than the past time. People have improved a better quality of life while others assume this can cause life worse than before. This continues to be a debatable issue around the world. I personally agree for several reasons which I will explain in this following passage.
Modernity in this century improves people’s life into a better living circumstance. First and foremost, the present is that people are less reliance on physical efforts. It is true that kinds of transportations are developed to reach the destination faster. For instance, in the past time, old people spent several days to travel from one city to another city while the better-improved transport connectivity, these days, can save the journey time. Furthermore, in the agricultural field, crops and yields can be easier due to employing the latest technologies such as tractors and harvesters by means that this might cut physical labor that farmers need to grow crops. In addition, one of the great revolutions in the 21st century is in medical advancement. To cite an example, one of the fundamental problems of historic times is a number of various diseases ( polio and malaria) which eradicated by the advanced medical equipment and proper medical attention.
Apparently, some people might debate the opposite view, arguing that the revolutionary of the present can cause negative effects to a future life and next generation. In spite of this, it is undeniable that the modernity of the 21st century has been proven good in almost all fields. The scientists and governments will also supervise such advancements in order to be enjoyed and used by the next generation in a future life.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the present increases the qualified life better than before showing that the revolutionary in many fields, such as transportation, agriculture, and medication, has successfully been achieved and this is accepted by people as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2693498452 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04888019233 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5817272511 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180545921763 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659939093257 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645428435663 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121371990162 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454650507234 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.