Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there has been a trend to study in abroad and set in there. As a result, they must speak a foreign language. Some people argue that speaking an others language than a person's mother tongue may lead to a social problems as well as practical problems. I personally believe that there might be challenges to live in different culture and language, the advantages are totally outweigh to the drawbacks.

To begin with, there are many reason behind of this problem but one of the main reason is migrants who do not speak or understand a native language, that person is fail to understand local people and that country culture, which is lead to social problem. They are hardly talk to that local people and lack of idea about the country culture due to this they cannot able to understand that country rules and regulations and how people feel in some major problems. So, they are failing to create a good relation from that local people. They have also struggle to live a routine life who cannot speak a local language. For instance, people have face like how to buy house-hold product because they have no any idea about how to explain that thing. Moreover, people are put themselves in social problems.

Furthermore, not knowing the local language makes it harder immigrants to find a direction, read important notices, order from a menu, talk to a local citizens for help and most important thing is how to manage a job. When employer are prefer some one that who can communicate with people, if they cannot so, that is leading an unemployed. Unknowing languages that people are facing a practical problem which is not unavoidable. My favor is that benefits are more than problems, if people want to set in foreign country. First of all, they need to build their new skill to communicate with the foreign people, they do a hard work to learn that language and the problem can be solving easily. Furthermore, if that person know that language they are live a life freely in abroad. By the way, live in foreign country and build a career is good opportunity for that person and get a good experience.
In addition, technology is that best option to improve language and solve problems too. For example, Google-map is help to give a direction and location. So, they don't need to ask about location from local people. Same as translator is also available for understand that local language. Overall, technology is the best option to make a life easily in foreign country, thanks to technology for this. I know that people who not only able to speak a local language is a practical challenge but also the thing is people have a much more benefit compare to challenges.
In conclusion, people may a face a social or practical problems when they live in abroad but they can be taken care of by the efforts of the local and migrants and the use of the technology. I suggest that they can benefit much more from being exposed to a foreign environment.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, there has been a trend to stud...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...age. Some people argue that speaking an others language than a persons mother tongue m...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...sons mother tongue may lead to a social problems as well as practical problems. I person...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...nd language, the advantages are totally outweigh to the drawbacks. To begi...
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...e totally outweigh to the drawbacks. To begin with, there are many reason beh...
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Suggestion: talked
...lead to social problem. They are hardly talk to that local people and lack of idea a...
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Suggestion: struggled
... from that local people. They have also struggle to live a routine life who cannot speak...
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...uy house-hold product because they have no any idea about how to explain that thin...
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...e put themselves in social problems. Furthermore, not knowing the local langu...
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...that person and get a good experience. In addition, technology is that best opt...
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...give a direction and location. So, they dont need to ask about location from local p...
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...ch more benefit compare to challenges. In conclusion, people may a face a socia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, by the way, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 7.30460921844 383% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 519.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70520231214 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55621346935 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42774566474 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9940505873 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.68 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.76 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220103923417 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680062376464 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572239680372 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142207761096 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026006289768 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments