Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Globalization made the vast world into a small village thereby creating plethora of opportunities for aspiring individuals. Those who settle in foreign countries are obligated to learn the language of the country in order to cope up with tasks they face everyday. I completely agree that expressing ideas in a foreign language may have serious social and practical repercussions. The following paragraph intend to discuss the reasons favouring that statement.
As all new places are coupled with fresh challenges, being in a foreign country creates a compulsion to speak a unknown language and comes with its own issues. For instance, due to language restrictions these people may be denied of opportunities, face discrimination as well as bullying. When attending events such as a interview or a social gathering, non-native speaker are put in a vulnerable position among other native speakers. This might be due to the lack of fluency, poor vocabulary knowledge and hesitancy to speak the newly learned language.
Most people wish to move abroad for tertiary education while some desire to find a dream job, but both group eventually plan to settle down there, eventhough this comes at a price. Results from a recent research done among immigrants living in various countries showed more than half of them have been facing discrimination either at work or study during their stay. In addition to this people find it really hard to ask for a location or bargain in a foreign language in daily situations.
In conclusion, many individuals aspire to live in other countries and convice themselves to learn a new language, but the practical and social disadvantages they might face are not given enough attention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...n order to cope up with tasks they face everyday. I completely agree that expressing id...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n country creates a compulsion to speak a unknown language and comes with its own...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...bullying. When attending events such as a interview or a social gathering, non-na...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...study during their stay. In addition to this people find it really hard to ask for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, really, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21299638989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97220898461 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7526747911 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234460402923 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808089017288 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674512096722 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132561948512 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487728212812 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.