Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems as well as practical problems. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that people are likely to face practical and social issues when they are living overseas and using a foreign language. I completely agree with this and also believe that the language barrier is the predominant cause of these problems.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that being unable to achieve language proficiency is the main reason, causing people to face practical problems, especially when they are living abroad. This means that if people are incapable of speaking such language as English, they will find it extremely difficult from starting a conversation to effectively communicate to socialize themselves with others. For instance, when employees including one, who could not speak English fluently or naturally, have a group discussion in their workplace, that one would not successfully speak his or her own voice or make a contribution. Consequently, this would adversely affect not only the performance of oneself but also that of a company as a whole.
Alongside with the consequence of practical problems, the language barrier is also a contributing factor in social ones. Particularly, when living in a foreign country and not speaking the mother tongue, people would be susceptible to many temptations caused by reckless individuals. This is illustrated by the fact that 80% of immigrants, transferring to the US and live, are victims in such criminal activities as harassment and robbery. Therefore, this would not only pose a threat, negatively affecting people’s mental conditions but also increase the rate of criminal commitment.
In conclusion, it is inevitable that people living overseas could confront with both practical and social issues due to the shortage of the ability to speak a foreign language, which causes a range of consequences such as the mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34722222222 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05863954214 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5642926438 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235259290832 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949124095344 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597576876436 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162871482847 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273044174568 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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