Most people try to balance between work and other parts of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this delicate balance. What are the main problems people are facing? What is the best way to overcome them?
A majority of people are unable to successfully stabilize their work and other parts of lives nowadays. Firstly, this essay will discuss the problems preventing them from achieving this balance and secondly, it will offer appropriate methods.
On the one hand, the main problem, which disables people from striking a balance between their work and other activities such as entertainment or relaxation, is due to their excessive workload. This causes them to take extra shifts to cope with the requirements and targets of the company. For instance, recent research has revealed that 80% of urban citizens having a full-time job are unable to properly take care of themselves such as checking for health or attending outdoor activities, and this results in inevitable consequences such as health-related issues or unhealthy lifestyles. Therefore, if people have to work constantly at their workplace, they will be less likely to spend time on other parts of their lives.
On the other hand, I believe that there would be appropriate solutions to deal with this problem. First, people should spend more time with their families and contribute to household responsibilities. This could not only help them to escape from their hectic schedule at work but also strengthen the bond between family members. Second, organizations should consider the personal needs of each employee and give them bonuses or wages so that they can be more motivated. This is illustrated by the fact that employees would feel more satisfied and less likely to experience depression or anxiety if they received favorable bonuses.
In conclusion, although it is challenging to strike a work-life balance in people’s lives, I believe that they should adjust their schedule at work and spend more time with other people to improve their lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'striking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: striking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31724137931 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89650246264 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8410177412 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242444777839 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980115382221 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595397828425 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172422032036 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395587831257 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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