Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Migrating to a foreign country can indeed result in many problems socially and practically. These problems might be derived from the difference in cultures. Natives, however, understand that one is a foreigner and will not mistreat you.

One of the most significant aspects of moving to a new country is knowing how to speak there. Language is stemmed from culture, and it is vital for immigrants to learn the destination country's culture as well as its language. If we do not acquire the culture, we might do something that is considered rude. Another pitfall is that since we do not know the culture, we may misunderstand what people do, and this might lead to some problems. As an example, shaking hand in middle east means accepting the deal between two parties, but in many countries, it is done when people want to say goodbye; this brings about a misunderstanding between to sides of a transaction.

Although many people argue that it might result in misunderstandings, natives can understand from immigrant's accent that he is not a native and help him realize what they mean by their action. Only can a mentally ill person who is racist do not help one when he realizes he is not from his country. This, however, should not avert us from striving to adapt ourselves to the new country.

There are some truths in the fact that learning and using new language can make misunderstandings, but we should not lose sight of the fact that natives can help us figure out what they mean.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...cant aspects of moving to a new country is knowing how to speak there. Language is stemmed...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...cant aspects of moving to a new country is knowing how to speak there. Language is stemmed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79922779923 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85091672656 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9531375111 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179107732807 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649512434799 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042314368144 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101420759967 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354673689499 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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