In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.
Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In a lot of nations , offspring are becoming obese and delicate . some people belive that the authorities should have the duties about this reality . From my perspective , i completely disagree with this statement .
Personally, I believe that eating habit of children is one of the most common reason of overweight and bad health of a child . Nowadays , the kids comsume a large amount fast food and junk food for instacne : chips , hamburger ,etc , and these kind of food have big quantity of calories , and its will make people get fat and some related disases . In addition , at present the infomation technology industry is growing day by day , as a result children health is effected negatively because a lot of childs are usally keep their eyes on their phone or computer and always sit in front of their electronic devices for a long time , the consequences are they will got some typical eyes problems like : short-sighted , astigmatism , Presbyopia . some mental problems : autism , Anxietism , etc , moreover the grease that their digest system have converted to energy will be accumulated and turn in to fat .
In fact , adults have a big responsibility to manage their children's eating habit . they should kep their eyes on what their children eat , and educate them to know what they eat , they should limit the amount of fast food that comsumed by their kids . Beside that they should create some outdoor activities for their offspring , and spend their time with their children .
in conclusion , the gorvements don't have any responsibility of overweight and unhealthy children , the biggest responsibility is belongs to their parents , and their parents should have solutions to tackle this phenomenal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16727272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81947052113 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.800862065 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138643195083 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635979122588 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335658272625 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998217812404 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256566917264 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.