In contemporary epoch, in several nations, excellent school and hospital facilities have been yielded in only urban areas. It is argued by some people that whether work ought to be done in rural rural areas for certain years by not only teachers but also doctors or everyone should be free to etc anywhere where one wants to do work. I would discuss both the views, and would give my opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs with conclusion at last.
To embark, the first and the foremost advantage of doing work in rural areas is that job can be obtained easily by not only tutors but also doctors because there are no competitions between educated doctors orr tutors. Hence, job opportunities can increase in rural areas. For instance, nowaday, in highly competitive era, educated teachers, as well as doctors, in the developed cities, have been available. Therefore, it is very adversity in order to take a job. Whereas, doctors and educaters, in rural areas, can take a job easily. Apart from that, one can get ample cognizance regarding prectical skill. Moreover, name, along with fame, can be obtained by teachers and doctors so that he or she can get a opportunities to do a work in urban areas. To illustrate, in spite of became a teacher, Amit badana could not get a job in advanced city then after he went to rural area where he had gotten a job easily. After working some years, he, in rural areas, has become vast name besides fame. Consequently, he had get a chance to work in LDRP school which is one of the best schools in entire the india. Nowadays, he has become a famous tutor in India.
However, yet there are some disadvantage that educaters and doctors cannot be encouraged by the expert doctors or tutors in deprived areas. Thus, it is very difficult to adequate prectical erudition concerning their fields. Hence, if people, who is known as doctors or tutors, can do job in developed city, people can be motivated by expert doctors or tutors. Thus, it is fruitful for doctors and teachers.
To sum up, I personally aver that work ought to be done anywhere where he or she wants to do ,for it depends on the their skills as well as knowledge touching field so it does not matter that whether doctor or tutor ought to do job in urban areas or deprived areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as for, for instance, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67245657568 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56263759212 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496277915633 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2285582127 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1052631579 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1052631579 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230717777659 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070782222623 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715603820971 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151357457612 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774103141516 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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