In contemporary epoch, it is argued by some people that whether new culture and traditional ought to be accepted by people who have been moving in overseas or people should live separate lifestyle. I would discuss both the views in the fourthcoming paragraphs with conclusion at last.
To embark, on the one hand, people,who migrate at host countries,can know regarding not only custom but also traditional. For instance,married women have been wearing jins as well as shirts or t-shirts in distinct countries such as Canada,London and America, the name but a few. Whereas,in India,after doing marriage, only sadi can be weared by females. Apart from that, indian female dose not prefer to wear shirts or t- shirts after married. Hence, if people migrate overseas,people can get ample cognizance regarding custom and traditional. It is helpful for mankind in order to live better tremendous life. Moreover,people can get adequate knowledge concerning religious along with new culture of host countries. To illustrate, halloween has been celebrated in foreign country like London and Canada just for fun and entirtainment; thus migrated people can know about holloween event which is not celebrated in India so that Indian people do not have knowledge concerning this event. Hence migration can give a opportunity to know about the culture besides religious.
However, on the other hand , people can prevent their own culture and traditional if people would prefer to live separate lifestyle. For example, indian people ,in birthday party,are not drinking alcohol because it is religious of indian country. In contract,in forieng country, on birthday, party have been organized in club including alcohol. Thus ,indian people prefer to live separate lifestyle in order to live away from this kind of drugs.
To sum up, I personally aver that although people have importance of their nation's culture, people should live with together ,for it is essential part of life by which people can know touching other counties religious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36677115987 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98995714852 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4433480568 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29264817386 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952977888669 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938586203617 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218554653722 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101923159702 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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