In contemporary epoch, in several nations, aged people have been enhancing daybyday. It is argued by some people that whether it has more merits or demerits on community. I would discuss not only positive side but also negative side in the fourthcoming paragraphs with the conclusion at last.
To embark, on the bright side, grand parents, who can heed their children, have been playing crucial role for family. For instance, in cut-throat compitition era, job has been done by their parents in order to earn money , by which parents can fulfil their rudimentary needs of tremendous life as well as their kin. Therefore, parents do not get an ample time to take care of their children. Hence, if grand parents are living with their family, they can care their children. Consequently, it is beneficial for kids along with parents. Moreover, aged people can adequate cognizance regrading any drastic problem which is being faced by their children. To illustrate, in materialistic world, people have been facing manifold harsh problems in their life; they do not have sufficient knowledge regarding any problem which is faced by people so that he or she can not do any thing in their life. Hence, people have been living togather with grand parents who give an erudition concerning problem according to experience of their life. It is fruitful for society.
However, on the dark side, most of the aged people are retier, and have been living sedentary life so pension has been yielded to retire people. Apart from that, not only accommodation but also land has been provided, in which abundance money has to be spent on this kind of thigs by bureaucrat. Hence, essential facilities, for people, cannot be provided in society to live life in king size. As a result it effects nagetively due to aged people.
To sum up, I personally aver that it has more advantges overshadow disadvantage. Albeit, old people are rising day-to-day, it is advantages for marvellous societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
... by their parents in order to earn money , by which parents can fulfil their rudim...
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Suggestion: anything
... by people so that he or she can not do any thing in their life. Hence, people have been ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d in society to live life in king size. As a result it effects nagetively due to a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03048780488 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7215514214 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.491809628 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107220032987 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360268461693 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298032527909 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072571999532 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347963788406 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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