In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
People in developing countries are now raising their living standard due to some factors. As a result, more and more people are buying food which was exported from another country rather than their local food. In this essay, I will be discussing some reasons which led to this problem and the solutions for it.
There are three primary reasons that caused this concerning issue. First of all, imported foods often have unique and better taste than local foods because people are familiar with their traditional foods so consuming foods from the other countries will make them feel tastier. Furthermore, nourishments which have been exported usually have better quality and hygiene than foods produced locally because there are plenty of local food manufacturers so it is hard for the government to control it. Finally, advertising plan is also a crucial factor that made massive impact on the consumption of foreign foods. For example, people can easily find McDonalds ads all around but it is hard for to find any traditional nourishment ads.
In order to solve this problem, there are some solutions that food producer can apply. Firstly, improving the quality and health safety is one of the most important ways to encourage people purchasing local food. Food manufacturers should ask the government to check their food quality and stick a quality guarantee label into their products. Secondly, creating advertisements and organize some taste test events at the market to advertise foods to many people is also an essential way to promote the sales of local foods.
In conclusion, I personally think that consuming foreign foods is good as acceptable as long as the balance between the local food and imported food is kept.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[6]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have usually been exported
...astier. Furthermore, nourishments which have been exported usually have better quality and hygiene than fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12014134276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57989735149 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2353477536 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447246067857 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155572596754 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13537556961 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283820242547 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015197250658 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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