Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As a result of rapid growth, many new diseases have been born which puts people’s lives in danger because there is no cure at the moment. The funds from the government are the only way to save them but it is limited so have to choose between preventing sickness or helping sick people. From my point of view, I think that government should focus on preventing diseases rather than saving people who are having the incurable illness.
First of all, “Prevention is better than cure” this is a statement that people often told each other when they just have any illness. It emphasizes the important role of prevention in our society. Without locating the main viruses which cause sickness and terminated it before it starts to multiply, it is hard for people to avoid getting infected. Since that, prevention is the crucial key for the government to protect their citizen's life. For instance, there used to be a petechial fever in Vietnam which infected thousands of people, however, due to the fast reaction of the government, the disease had been stopped right in time before it spread out the entire country.
Furthermore, treating people who are already sick would not always be successful. In some cases, patients might be worse after taking some treatment because the medications are not compatible with them. Moreover, it is only waste of money helping patients who have deadly diseases such as final stage cancer because there is no cure for them. Instead of doing that, the government could use the money to develop vaccines or putting guide banners to help people have more knowledge about the diseases.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that funding money to help sick people might work in some cases however, it is vital for the government to prevent viruses from infecting their citizens.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98026315789 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60399191473 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2686533173 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225600554937 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852051504919 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434057562302 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14440011406 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224964952401 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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