In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?
In today’s world, it appears to be proven that a lot of native tongues are gradually becoming obsolete and this trend is prevalent chiefly among youngsters. It seems to me that this development is inevitable and should be accepted by the reasons this essay will analyze.
Perhaps, the major factor here is globalisation; the process that unifies differences between countries and ethnic groups and considerably influences languages. While many nations in the world tend to integrate in the global economical, political and technological activities, and languages of these nations change appropriately, other part of the world considers to stay aside from this integration. Moreover, many experts claim that the most languages that are forgotten are pertain to this part of the world because these tongues are enclosed, and, thus, their resource do not have enough power to describe modern world adequately and consistently. To illustrate that, if traditional language do not involve or tend to borrow modern words such as “the internet” or “smartphone”, young native speakers may prefer to learn foreign language than speak native tongue. Another point to consider is that the most youngsters in the world seem to be fascinated by educational and employment opportunities that the western world provide. This lead to the necessity of studying a one of the western languages, and, thus, their native tongue will be gradually forgotten.
While it may be correct that saving dying languages has become a matter of life for some enthusiasts, it still appears to be the case, however, that the process of obsoleting some amount of tongues cannot be stopped.
Overall, it seems to me that the inevitability of disappearing several dialects in the world is become quite evident. I hope, these nations will find power to adopt to these changes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay's world, it appears to be proven that a lot of native tongues are gradual...
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Suggestion: considers staying
... appropriately, other part of the world considers to stay aside from this integration. Moreover, ...
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Suggestion: pertained
...e most languages that are forgotten are pertain to this part of the world because these...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... hope, these nations will find power to adopt to these changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36054421769 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12674589112 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5459572002 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142118624956 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553071177002 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517627170215 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850177440513 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531867028065 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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