In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
In many nations, the amount of youngsters comprehend the news in traditional ways like newspapers or directly from televisions has altogether fell dramatically as of late. I will try to throw light upon this pattern as well as I will try to offer some solutions.
Initiatively, there are multifarious reasons to shore this trend of the youth. To start with, the movement is due to the invention of modern gadgets nowadays. To explain, every digital equipments all over the world are throbbing with the internet connection which is the key to open the bank of knowledge. The various information on the internet turns it into surpluses seeming much more attractive and selective than the one on the newspaper. Additionally, common newspapers and news on tv are lack of convenience in comparison with Electric newspaper. Especially, apps emerge on smartphones or laptops allow readers to get accessed to the news sources immediately and of course freely and hence it dwindles the subsistence of news on paper or simple channels.
On the other hand, traditional type of news also brings remarkable merits.Apparently, the campaign to increase the proportion of users must be carried out with the cooperation between the business and the government. As an illustration, discount should be given to monthly customers which will definitely pull in more clients. Probing further, people are prone to watching news on tv if the program is more well-organised.
Conclusively, modern technology is devouring the subsistence of the traditional stuff. Otherwise, that is the human biases, and people have the right to choose things that suit them best.
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also, apparently, hence, if, so, well, of course, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27376425856 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1593961048 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4157650599 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104132618265 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335716010072 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357808840415 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551536067623 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188606398022 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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