In many countries, weddings are getting big and expensive today as they were in past.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is it a negative or positive development?
With an individual become wealthful, people often believe in show-off their opulence to the public and due to that they spend extravagant money on various occasion. Today, in all family where weddings and marriage will be organized they often perplexed about the how much money would be spent on that and it is one of the controversial topic because people judge the particular person by the services, that provides during the occasion. I firmly believe that abundant money spent on such a program would be insignificant.
There are many manifolds points for shore up my point of view. First and foremost, today people pay-up their almost money in such occasion just for showing how they are wealthy. But, they do not consider every aspect of human life. A person earns the money for the happiness of the family, not for showing how they are rich. However, on activities like marriage proper organizer required, but not paying the huge amount of money. For example, in India bussinessman organize marriage by paying several million rupees but, they forgot the real mean of their earning money. They invite the VIP guests and provide first class services by use of enormous amount of money.
Furthermore, emphasizing of my point of view. The income tax department of India show their report and assure that, in India most public waste their money on local occasion like weddings and openings of houses and shops. Secondly, report shows that most people put the money in order to save money from paying tax. Although, many educated people not spending more money in that, some orthodox people still believe in pay-up money in family occasion.
To conclude, every coin has two sides. Hence, spending more money is not an exception in the world. A person must check their economic condition before they organize luxurious party. As a truth that in the world no person has same economic condition, Therefore, they allow to provides first-class services by worth of their money. In my point of view this topic takes place on neutral side; but in developing country, we needless to say that it is totally worse development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: how
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97191011236 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44871007629 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536516853933 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6171768868 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1578947368 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823051157108 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287867348285 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252677484138 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534601255484 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192828231634 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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