In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able do not require security from a man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern era, the dependency of female on male has been reduced to a large extent. This is because wide range of opportunities are made available to women which were not there in the past. However, some people argue that all these reasons are influencing women to live independently, and they don’t feel the need to get married anymore in most of the countries.
To begin, women in today’s generation are excelling in almost all the fields in which they enter. Some people claim that the main reason responsible for this new trend is the various employment opportunities available for women. Over recent years, it can be seen that the proportions of women interested in pursuing higher degrees has risen. This rise in literacy rate leads to the increased employment rate among women and this allows them to grab more number of jobs in turn helping them to satisfy their financial needs. Secondly, in many countries, in the past women were not allowed to study or work. But, these days there are no such restrictions imposed on women. They are independent and are completely habituated to free life. So, they are wishing to be in their comfort zone and don’t feel like getting married. Finally, these days women are scared of household responsibilities. For instance, marriage brings in a lot of changes and responsibilities and these changes may become an obstacle in achieving their dreams. Therefore, they tend to avoid marriages and become successful.
Nevertheless, though this is common practice in most of the countries, few countries still adhere to the moral values and traditions that were established in the past. Though women are busy in their professional life it is not true that they don’t have time for their personal life. In few countries, women still prefer to get married despite the fact that they don’t need financial support. Also, some people point out that, financial support is not the only reason for getting married. People wish to have a family who supports them all the time and they don’t feel loneliness.
To sum up, I believe that due to the drastic changes brought in society and increased employment opportunities, women are willing to follow the trend of not getting married. Though this is true in case of most of the countries, few countries still give importance to marriage and family and believe that this can’t be an obstacle in obtaining successful career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82425318193 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491358024691 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5105176567 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240729911713 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742362265843 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412065860733 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161909562691 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232354510294 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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