Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol.
What is your opinion?
Due to the strict laws implemented by several government around the world, hard drugs like heroine and cocaine have been made illegal to consume. But, on the other hand, milder drugs such as tobacco and alcohol are legal above certain age. In my opinion, the laws against drugs should be equally implemented irrespective of the strength as at the end they do cause harm to our body.
To begin with, drugs in any form, hard or alcohol or tobascco, cab be fatal and cause devastating effect on our body. For example, if a person consumes tobacco, has higher risk of mouth alser and dangerous desease like cancer. Even the consumption of hard drugs like heroine and cocaine can cause mental illess and have several side effects of permenant brain damage. AS the effects of these drugs being harmfull to our good health, these drugs should be banned for consumption and sale, irrespective of its strength or origin of manufacturing being natural or synthetic.
Additionally, alcohol do have long term or life long effects on the consumer. If consumed over a limit, alcohol can severely damage the liver and cause cellular mutation leading to cancer. Even consumption of alcohol can cause loss of appetite, dehydration and severe head ache. Also, it may lead to memory loss and dur to excessive drinking of alcohol, it may cause alcohol poisoning, which may be fetal. Therefore, due to all thses reasons, alcohol has devastating effects on the health and well being of the consumer.
In conclusion, alcohol and tobacco can severly damage the health of the person who consumes them. Thus, such types of drugs should be made illegal and should impose the same status as hard drugs like heroine and cocaine, do.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92733564014 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51447837561 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2649018785 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362933396345 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125044676841 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091306446073 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248589942194 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108759141587 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.