Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that the government should focus on enhancing the economic growth of its nation, whereas some others assert that there will be different ways that are equally crucial for a country. In my viewpoint, I agree with the latter opinion for the following compelling reasons.
On the one hand, economic progress plays an important role in a country's growth. It is one of the essential factors of all. Every country should focus on the well-being of its individuals in society. For example, New Zealand focuses more on the needs of its people to provide the best to their communities. Admittedly, In 2021, their Gross Domestic Product(GDP) rate was increased to 3% compared to last year. Since, people's rate of income is directly proportional to the rate of increase in the price of goods and services such as technological advancements, affordable prices in the market, labor forces, and many more. As a result, state tax income also grows which leads to the development of the state's economy.
On the other hand, some other elements need to be taken care of, apart from economic progress like prioritizing basic needs and happiness of individuals, introducing new policies into plans for the deprived population, and many more. To explain this, although Japan is considered an advanced nation in terms of technology, it lacks freedom in a few aspects. Thus, the human race is experiencing a lot of problems. In detail, there are some rules and strict regulations in choosing the type of haircut that a man does in his life. There is limited access to all the resources. Therefore, it is pivotal to take little effort in focusing on such trivial things for the happiness of their society.
To recapitulate it, as it stands now, it is not only responsible for the local bodies to prioritize the wealth of its country, but also should concentrate on various factors which are equivalent to the wellness of their citizens in my opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 699, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'states'' or 'state's'?
Suggestion: states'; state's
...s which leads to the development of the states economy. On the other hand, some other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93902439024 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79259638805 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6237720903 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220437856692 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057194268342 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616991228147 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122902023809 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432263082115 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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