Many local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with larger supermarkets in the area.
How does this effect local communities ?
How could this situation be improved ?
In a particular area, there must be a larger supermarket where everybody goes and shops there and also several local shops that in a verge of bankcruptcy. People might be unaware of this situation, especially to the people who are ignorant to their surroundings. But, this situation has huge effect to the local communities as they experience a great loss of income.
It is clearly that everyone prefers to go to big market instead of shopping in small local stores. They believe that large supermarket provides its customer with complete necessary goods and has better quality. Meanwhile, people are oftenly skeptical about local stores as they doubt about the quality of the goods, because, obviously it is cheaper than in supermarket. Therefore, local communities will face a huge loss, and if this condition do not handle well, the stores can close due to bankcruptcy.
In order to help local stores to gain popularity among majority of people, governments and people can help by promoting local stores in many social media platform. Besides that, people can try to shop more at local stores as abundant stores have the same quality with more affordable price. For example, if there are similar type of skincare, people will more likely to buy it at supermarket as it is one of the imported goods with more popular brands. In the other hand, local shop, which only popular among locals, also sell it with similar ingredients and cheaper price. However, people are skeptical towards these things.
However, it is a difficult condition to be improved because many people already have the same mind set towards stores, but, we have to try to also support local shops, so, both of sides can face balanced benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98611111111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58810789364 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5394595295 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308140551044 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110951704621 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699731695029 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195378123831 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962187289573 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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