Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Some museums have an admission charge while others do not. I believe that that entrance fee has more benefits than drawbacks, particularly operation and development of the museums.
One key advantage with entrance fee is that museums have the financial resources for regular maintenance. Museums can use the accrued admissions for maintenance of collections, buildings and facilities, and hire professionals. Apart from that, museums can also tap into the financial resources to house more exhibitions and organise activities that visitors can participate. Take Chimei Museum in Taiwan for example, not only that it houses a wide range of collections from animals to weaponry and music instruments, but it provides guided tours, exhibits special painting collections and organises a musical event where visitors can enjoy.
While the admission fee is favourable to the museums, there are negative unintended consequences. The major concern is that the museums may fail to attract visitors, hence not only that they can no longer spread historical and education values, also lead to insufficient funds for further maintenance, which may again cause fewer visitors to come. A free museum may attract visitors subsequently promote cultural values, take the Dr Sun Yat-Sen Museum for instance, which is free of charge, and foreign or local visitor can learn the historical significance of this figure who was the founding father of Taiwan.
To summarise, it is evident that there are both pros and cons when an admission fee is charged. With the points discussed above, I am convinced that museums should collect admission fee for maintenance and development purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47104247104 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92701783415 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2132524987 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258540929531 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109762447224 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713638043388 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158579678435 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015135771547 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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