In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they by punished?
It is true that there is an ever-increasing rate of juvenile delinquents all over the world. There are numerous reasons could be identified for this criminal behaviour of those young offenders, who should be punished accordingly with different punishments.
At least two reasons could explain for this criminal tendency of children and teenagers. One possible motivation for them is that they have been living in economically deprived background, meaning that they have to struggle on a daily basis to earn a living, as a way to help their low-income parents. Experencing hardships and discomforts for a long time could cultivate law-breaking intentions in their mindset, in a mistaken belief that they could escape from their poor standards of living. Besides, another incentive for them to turn to crime career could be that they was born and raised in a family that have working parents who have insufficient time to instil in their offspring basic code of conduct and deter them from offending intentions. Those children, therefore, are highly susceptible to crime, especially copycat crime, once they tried to emulate offenders' behaviour on television.
Appropriate punishments, thereafter, should be imposed for those delinquent children depending on their level of committing crimes. For those teenage shoplifters, for instance, they should be educated compulsorily in special educational classes where they are taught by police officers who could instruct them about the consequences of all criminal acts. This could, therefore, have the deterrent effects on those children and teenagers themselves to prevent them from breaking the law. Whereas, with regard to dangerous criminals such as arsonists and vandals, a zero tolerant policy is essential, although they are still young. Prison sentence could be applied in this crime, for instance.
In conclusion, children and teenagers who come from poor background families and upbringing could be subject to criminal tendency. Proper punishments are crucial for them depending on different criminal activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60317460317 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96534786861 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3117325267 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.071428571 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166716500909 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673741856242 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361719890903 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110591433264 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384432974534 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.