Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?
Nowadays, A majority of people presume that a country should focus on manufacturing different items and materials for its growth. Well, I totally agree with the following statement but at the same time, I believe there other factors which can't be ignored.
Firstly, there are numerous factors that can't be ignored in the process of becoming a manufacturing hub. Factors such as Railways, Roadways, Waterways, and Airways are the most valuable pillars of any producing nation to supply the goods. When a country starts making items in demand automatically it starts exporting to other states in the world and these create revenue in foreign currency which ultimately benefits the forex reserve of the nation and country as a whole. For example, China is one of the highest goods-producing and supplying nations in the world and when people look back they are really amazed to see how the country was in the past and how it is now. The whole country has changed drastically after the Industrial revolution started in China.
On the other hand, there are some obstacles that can't be ignored. First of all, the government should give attractive offers to the investors or the industrialists who are planning to invest in the following sector. There should be enough manpower available to establish the whole setup. Apart from these, the most important thing is providing suitable land for easy production and supply of materials. For example, In recent times India after the pandemic started acting on this situation very aggressively and the government initiative of attracting various investors is really a great success in terms of foreign policy and revenue.
To conclude, I would say that yes! any country that is focussing on manufacturing and exporting can be a game-changer for that particular country as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, really, so, well, apart from, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13087248322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8216288856 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7425364192 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135590553598 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487214505726 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304997834401 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861239372686 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232000851922 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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