Many people believe that that international tourism is a bad thing for this countries.What are the reasons for this?what can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
It is true that today international tourism is very common for their nations through some older ponder that international tourists instead of it is not good thing in their world.The root can that there are plethora reasons for this.This essay would throw some light an all the aspects to see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant nowadays every youth have a dream go abroad but also they has high studies achieve in our life.Therefore,some adolescent think that international tourism is not superb for teenager.
Hence,international tourists could not need good facilities their customers.Otherwise,
sometimes customers can not understand foreign languages.For instance,Spanish,China,
French,Arabic and non - education dweller should not speak better to the English language in whole international countries.
Nevertheless,there are no denying, in my point of view, education plays a vital role in human being life.Otherwise,some utilise say that pupil might good in their education in their life whereas they should not bad tourism in our life because they has spoken all the language in whole life and everywhere.For examples,Australia,New Zealand,America and Canada extra.Lastly,pupil
can handle any situation in their life while they are Co-education and it would not immense matter deal for international tourism if they can do it with positive behaviour forwards international tourism.
All said and done,I reckon educational is very essential part of life then off spring would achievement everything in their life.On other hand I think that people must good education in our life.Thus,they can handle any situation in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70866141732 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88420633123 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.295875817 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.0 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.8 7.06120827912 422% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232166282489 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132083129886 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716140735365 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108299208284 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729482991718 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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