Our planet is becoming more uninhabitable every day due to pollution and exploitation of natural resources. Despite of the awareness created among people regarding environmental protection, people are oblivious about their contribution towards it. In this essay I will discuss about the reasons for peoples’ ignorance over their contribution towards environmental protection and suggest some measures that individuals could take to make this planet inhabitable for every creature.
There are several reasons on why people put no effort in preserving our planet, of which I will discuss two primary ones. First of all, most people are held up with their routine lifestyle, in which they do not get time to think about the global issues. They are constantly in the urge for developing themselves in a way that will benefit them financially rather than thinking about the environment and its problems. In addition to this, people restrain themselves from putting any efforts as they think that their little effort will not have significant effort on the environment. People are already aware that travelling through public transportations, for instance, is a better way to save the nature, but still they prefer private cars as they think their minuscule effort will not have much impact on preserving it.
In order to save the environment, individuals could take some crucial measures which can preserve our planet from deteriorating further. One of the most significant steps would be to opt for public transportation whenever possible, so that we can reduce the carbon emissions in the atmosphere; thereby reducing the global warming. Another step would be carrying cloth bags for shopping. This would reduce the usage of plastic bags which are non-recyclable and the most troublesome factor for the environment. Unless people take these simple measures, it is difficult to save our mother nature from perils of air and plastic pollution.
In conclusion, due to their busy lifestyle and ignorance over the significance of their contribution towards the environment, people do not take any effort in preserving our planet. I feel by preferring public transportation at most times and avoiding plastic bags, individuals could contribute in saving our nature.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, still, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4011299435 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99565582881 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533898305085 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2310141211 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177557297511 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591666036438 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500428346643 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992715219316 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703210221318 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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