Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
From the past generation until this modern era, scienctists have investigated in many different fields. Nowadays, there is a controversial issue that the administration should take control for scientific research. In relation to this given topic, I partially disagree due to some relevant reasons which will be explored in following paragraphs.
To start with, some people pursuade that government has sufficient funds and avilities to hire intelligent people.When they are incharge of the research, generally, the quality of research would be higher than not that of. The out come would be used for public profits. T take korean government as an example, they invested funds to descover oil fields in Pacific ocean, then, fortunately, they found one. The korean government anounced that the profits will be utilised for Koreans.
On the other side off the coin, some private companies have spcialty in their fields. even though they do not have enough budget and labour forces, they have more motivations and determination about research as they have clear targets which could offer more profits. Thus, they find efficient and convenient way to get better outcome. For instance, the rocket company spacex which was established by Elon Musk who invented paypal succeeded to produce sustainable rocket engine. It highly decreased the price of shooting rocket to the space which became sensation in the world. However, NASA which is reserch institute in USA could not solve this problem for few decades.
Taking everthing into account, government has more plenty of sources whereas some private companies specialize in some particular parts. In my perspective, the best mesthod to get better research is coordination. Government support the companies which have potentials and experts, it probably yields synergy effects.
From the past generation until this modern era, scienctists have investigated in many different fields. Nowadays, there is a controversial issue that the administration should take control for scientific research. In relation to this given topic, I partially disagree due to some relevant reasons which will be explored in following paragraphs.
To start with, some people pursuade that government has sufficient funds and avilities to hire intelligent people.When they are incharge of the research, generally, the quality of research would be higher than not that of. The out come would be used for public profits. T take korean government as an example, they invested funds to descover oil fields in Pacific ocean, then, fortunately, they found one. The korean government anounced that the profits will be utilised for Koreans.
On the other side off the coin, some private companies have spcialty in their fields. even though they do not have enough budget and labour forces, they have more motivations and determination about research as they have clear targets which could offer more profits. Thus, they find efficient and convenient way to get better outcome. For instance, the rocket company spacex which was established by Elon Musk who invented paypal succeeded to produce sustainable rocket engine. It highly decreased the price of shooting rocket to the space which became sensation in the world. However, NASA which is reserch institute in USA could not solve this problem for few decades.
Taking everthing into account, government has more plenty of sources whereas some private companies specialize in some particular parts. In my perspective, the best mesthod to get better research is coordination. Government support the companies which have potentials and experts, it probably yields synergy effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n era, scienctists have investigated in many different fields. Nowadays, there is a controvers...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...nd avilities to hire intelligent people.When they are incharge of the research, gene...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: OUT_COME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outcome'?
Suggestion: outcome
...h would be higher than not that of. The out come would be used for public profits. T tak...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ompanies have spcialty in their fields. even though they do not have enough budget a...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'supports'.
Suggestion: supports
...er research is coordination. Government support the companies which have potentials and...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n era, scienctists have investigated in many different fields. Nowadays, there is a controvers...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...nd avilities to hire intelligent people.When they are incharge of the research, gene...
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Line 13, column 228, Rule ID: OUT_COME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outcome'?
Suggestion: outcome
...h would be higher than not that of. The out come would be used for public profits. T tak...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ompanies have spcialty in their fields. even though they do not have enough budget a...
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Line 17, column 225, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'supports'.
Suggestion: supports
...er research is coordination. Government support the companies which have potentials and...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255255255255 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.16966966967 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103603603604 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405405405405 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0375375375375 0.0437548338989 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106606606607 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.039039039039 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77421355822 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285285285285 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.003003003003 0.00163938923432 183% => OK
Determiners: 0.0810810810811 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225225225225 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225225225225 0.011925033212 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3848.0 1933.35771543 199% => OK
No of words: 596.0 316.048096192 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.45637583893 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.20517956788 117% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426174496644 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325503355705 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25 0.203846283523 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154362416107 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77421355822 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.330536912752 0.56093040696 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.9969903204 60.7387585426 66% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0891783567 211% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 17.5294117647 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7848585091 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.176470588 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.235294117647 0.814263465372 29% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38877755511 205% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.0797473352 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.61818181818 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353311468539 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0580789191722 0.102741220458 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0499479053594 0.0668466124924 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468712040004 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108849293722 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115636195297 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127170314383 0.0742795772207 171% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241995062538 0.324371583561 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0403431235253 0.0638462369009 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252378465122 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.266688145602 0.058150111329 459% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.68436873747 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 1.9629258517 458% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 27.0 10.4468937876 258% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.