Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Ammu Helen
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In recent years, social media and banking websites have grown in popularity because of the ease with which many tasks can be done. In order to sign up for these websites personal information must be given. This development is negative. This essay will discuss why this development is negative.
Providing personal information such as telephone number and address is a risk because it can violate one’s privacy. Bank websites require a person to input their card numbers, date of expiration, PIN numbers and CVV. If bank servers are hacked the hacker can find out all of one’s personal information just by accessing their profile on the banks databases. This sensitive information being leaked can cause the hacker to remotely transfer all the money from the person’s account to their own.
Social media websites urge people to submit all of their information including their address and contact information in order to make it easier for them to make use of the facilities provided on their platform. They will even tell their users that they will not display or share this information unless they are given permission. They then usually proceed to violate the privacy of their users by selling this information to the highest bidder. This is a security risk as we do not know who this information is sold to and what their intentions are.
In conclusion, this development is a negative one as a person could be putting themselves, their money or their family in danger. People must be careful and should not share all of their personal and sensitive information online as that decision could come back to negatively affect them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ate of expiration, PIN numbers and CVV. If bank servers are hacked the hacker can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03558718861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64204139267 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1892279922 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380655680615 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132994058066 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497120440226 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177354815865 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089848083083 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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