Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past. Why is that so? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
In this day and age, the growing use of informal written language by a huge throng has been transpiring. The widespread use of instant communication on the Internet is a core ground which can spark the reduction of employment rate and the lower academic outcomes.
Admittedly, it is visible that the prevalence of social media has done a great disservice to people’s written language. The fact is people currently get exposure to social platforms, especially Messenger and Zalo, which serve as a tool to help them interact with others immediately by texting. Therefore, people are adversely impacted by cyber culture such as abbreviations that are created by Internet users to make them easier and more convenient in sending messages. Indeed, they are more inclined to turn these kinds of abbreviated words into their own writing and make it become their habit when they write.
In the interim, there are two profound pitfalls that using less formal written language can bring to people. First off, employees tend to leave a bad impression with the manager in a country or, worse still, they can be refused when their language in CV is written in a relaxed way. Practically, myriad imperative documents like CV form need writing and checking cautiously in order to grab the manager’s attention; conversely, informal writing style makes employees find it arduous to seize job opportunity. Second, students are likely to get unexpected scores in academic tests if they still retain their less formal writing. To be more specific, if students use informal words in their exams at school, they will be criticized for showing their irresponsibility and disregard for the tests. As a result, they can be given a low score in these tests.
To sum up, less formal written language can be contributed by texting via social platforms and it can lead to serious disadvantages for people such as getting low scores at exams and being rejected in applying for jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a relaxed way" with adverb for "relaxed"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06172839506 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80194561924 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5131166476 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.153846154 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180164319651 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065581901372 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549864040915 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106512677276 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02174751114 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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