Currently, the growing population has given rise to the high demand for new accommodation. It is considered by some that the only place to build buildings is in the countryside, while others disagree and believe that the rural idyll should be protected from any regenerations. I do not agree with the latter opinion, in my opinion, newly built areas with long-term planning would be beneficial for dwellers and creating a desirable place to live.
To begin with, populous cities are already limited with vacant places for construction. For this reason, to build new resident dwellings places such as parks, green areas and gardens should be demolished and occupied. It might not only negatively affect public health due to cutting down natural lungs in the form of trees but also eliminate places to relax increasing stress levels among residents. Furthermore, increased strain on existing facilities might occur as a result of sprawling cities and overcrowded areas. It would mean that keep doing construction would rather exacerbate existing issues linked with congestion and air pollution than will tackle problems related to the lack of homes.
In addition, having built homes in the countryside is seems to be a feasible solution to ease problems with congested roads and overpopulation. In other words, developing new accommodations from scratch tend to easily take into consideration previous slip-ups and bear in mind while creating new facilities. For instance, creation commercial and recreational facilities within walking distance that may contribute to diminish unnecessary commuting and numbers vehicle on roads. Moreover, having developed infrastructure may encourage people to relocate from stuffy cities to peaceful leafy places far from bustling centres. Therefore, it would be advisable to start afresh the construction of new residential buildings in rural areas.
In conclusion, although many people hold the view that the countryside should be imposed limitation of construction, I think that it conversely may address existing problems in overcrowded cities such as congestion and sprawling cities and create a better place to live in rural areas building new facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54005934718 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0134433332 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60237388724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.056188929 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.357142857 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249163336927 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799450263654 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600734899817 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155179979374 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379020786353 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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