Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations. What are the problems of this cause and how can those problems be solved?
In a fierce competition, a majority of junior firms are being to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations. There are two major drawbacks to it and it is going to examine those accounts.
First and foremost, it is a basic character of human to collect wealthy much more than the other. Some people believe that by joining with the abroad companies will give them high salaries instead of taking apart with small organizations. In addition, the high wages also have a beneficial to cover all of their consumerization need in the future. Hence, it is a common reason why people attended the job fair of multinational corporations is higher than attending the local companies’ job fair.
Secondly, to those who enjoy the challenge, joining the small businesses will give various experiences and will be useful for their career in the following years. However, it does not give an opportunity to learn more comprehensive – especially to junior employees. Due to lack of human resources and annual income, the small company does not make a comprehensive learning system to the company’s staff that benefits to development for the career in advanced.
The issue can be solved if there are subsidies from the third part, such as government, an international bank, and a local bank. Through the subsidies, the junior business will be keep exist and able to make system’s career inside the company well-known and competitive.
Ultimately, I suggest to the small corporations to make comprehensive’s proposal in order to ask help supporting the expenditures during whole years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to support' or 'support'.
Suggestion: to support; support
...ve's proposal in order to ask help supporting the expenditures during whole years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26436781609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24541201817 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5122330744 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196215058725 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690113106257 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949648761482 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112772216281 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943124978212 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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