Many societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people, therefore, think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive the government funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
Supporting university fees for students who study necessary subjects might bring both advantages and disadvantages. However, I strong believe that this educational policy will carry more benefits than drawbacks.
There are some cons in this policy. Firstly, it is unfair to every students because government only pay fees for a part of all students. Poor students have to give up their dreams and study some subjects they do not like if they do not afford to pay university fees. Instead of this, government should support for students in difficult conditions, which will bring many benefits for individuals. Secondly, this policy will encourage the large number of students to study subjects government supports. In the long term, this leads to the excess of the number of specialists in some fields, which indirectly causes unemployment. If government does not use this policy in a flexible way, which will have negative effect on communities.
However, beside some disadvantages this educational policy also have some advantages. Firstly, this policy will enable government to train many students to become specialists such as doctors, teachers,… which satisfies social demand. Therefore, this policy solves the lack of specialists situation in a fast way. Secondly, it encourages parents and teachers to consider to some subjects which are neglecting. Goverment helps them know importance and necessarity of these subjects to society so they will support teenagers to study these subjects. As a result, many students are interested in these subjects and fields, so they will select these subjects to study.
All in all, students do not pay university fees in some subjects, which carry both cons and pros to individual and society. However, I think that it brings more many advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40070921986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85793603856 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503546099291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7611570047 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299458944627 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102688286235 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645856185836 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193066839062 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292704216203 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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