Internet and mobile phones are ubiquitous such that it has reached almost 99.99% of the population in the globe. Among them, the hexagenerian and septuagenarian uses the mobile along with internet for rare cases. However, there are a variety of purpose the elderly persons can avail the internet productively.
Elders with health problems have a plethora of health apps in the play store. The diabetics are aided with a special app to keep in track about the sugar intakes for the day. similarly, people with blood pressure and high cholesterol are bolstered with experts online to advice about the required physical activities to assuage their health conditions. It is more important to pursue the elderly persons to use these apps and benefit them in just a single click rather than approaching the hospitals.
Apart from the health benefits, retired intellectuals can use the option to teach online. Having ample amount of experience in their technical field, a retiree can easily fetch an online job to teach various students worldwide. Somehow, such jobs can help to mitigate any financial barrier a retired person undergoes after his work tenure ends. In fact, it is a best option to eke money by just spending few hours online without any strain and stress.
Furthermore, there are various other options for investing money online. Senior persons who are willing to get profits exponentially can opt for investing in digital marketing, trading and stock exchange. Nowadays, it is not necessary for them to wander from place to place to keep records or upload any documents required for the investments.
Parents who are far away from their children can easily communicate with them through eclectic video call options. It is an incredible gift for the younger as well the elderly generation to connect with their loved ones immediately and this can in turn wipe away the feeling of loneliness they pass through. Moreover, elders can easily book tickets online with just a tap of their fingers. Internet and smartphones have made the life of all sections of people easier than ever the mankind could even imagine decades ago.
To conclude, elderly people are benefited in various means. It is easy for them to keep savings, commute, communicate, maintain health and it brings the world very closer to them than they really have to stress or worry about. Hence, proper awareness must be made to make them understand the usage of technology in a productive way. Younger generations must be the proper knowledge transfer tool to the elders for educating them about the smart usage of internet and mobile phones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly
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Suggestion: the
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'place to'.
Suggestion: place to
...s not necessary for them to wander from place to place to keep records or upload any documents re...
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Line 6, column 313, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive way" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...them understand the usage of technology in a productive way. Younger generations must be the proper...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt usage of internet and mobile phones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, well, apart from, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10185185185 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5941752775 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55787037037 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.884221931 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219334678192 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628119784494 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563267799595 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115491841135 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872337313263 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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