In a letter to the editorial column of the Balmer Island Gazette, the author of the passage made certain suggestions to the town council regarding the limitations of mopeds usage during the summer season. He contrasted the outcome of a rule enforced by the seaville island that reduced the annual accident rates by 50%. The author seems to assert few statements and completely unaware about few other predictions that could weaken his argument. The following passage substantiates few factors that need to be subsumed beforehand the town council framed the rules for moped rental associations.
Firstly, the author mentions about the increase in population during the summer season. This means that Balmer island is a centre for tourist attraction in peak summer leading to nearly a drastic increase in its' population. Meanwhile, the seaville island serves no valid purpose of holding the tourists during summer. Framing new protocols regarding the moped rentals can affect the tourism of Balmer island enormously. Conversely, Seaville island seems to earn its' revenue through sustainable occupation. If this statement proves to be true, then the predictions that the author makes is inclined to a low revenue to the Balmer island.
The author states the accidents caused by the moped and the pedestrians. It is not justifiable to blame only the mopeds as a reason for the accidents. Balmer Island has great lacuna in the traffic rules for the pedestrians. There can be a need for the enforcement of better traffic rules and protocols by the government which the seaville island has already initiated. Consequently, Seaville island with a better articulation of traffic flow and zebra crossing rules have achieved the 50% declination in its' accident report to the town council. If this argument holds to be true, then the authors' claim over the moped rentals seems to get enervated of it's future predictions.
Finally, Seaville island must have a lesser population and the peak season never tantamount to the demography of Balmer island. Lesser population means less governance and hence, is proportional to the lesser accident cases. In this case, the author juxtaposing both the island with invalid data and evidences can never strengthen his predictions for the Balmer island.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... the limitations of mopeds usage during the summer season. He contrasted the outcome of a rule en...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...about the increase in population during the summer season. This means that Balmer island is a cen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 365.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25479452055 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78364254008 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7582071458 57.8364921388 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.947368421 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330408866867 0.218282227539 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113127734768 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608051434893 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21782414505 0.128457276422 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040555291458 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... the limitations of mopeds usage during the summer season. He contrasted the outcome of a rule en...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...about the increase in population during the summer season. This means that Balmer island is a cen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 365.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25479452055 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78364254008 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7582071458 57.8364921388 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.947368421 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330408866867 0.218282227539 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113127734768 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608051434893 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21782414505 0.128457276422 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040555291458 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.