More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Nowadays, many people are moving to cities to find a better future; but living in a city is not easy, and sometime it is nightmare to live for some people. There are some reasons making people feel difficult to live in a city, and of course, if government really cares about this issue, they can make urban life better for everyone by some solutions.
Living and working in a city is a dream of many people. City offer to them a lot of chance and challenge in their career development; it also has many foundations supporting modern living such as healthcare, hospitality and entertainment, and third-level education. However, city itself has many potential difficulties to new comers. Living cost, which is always expensive, is the first thing that new comers need to consider before moving to city. Secondly, living and working condition in city is extremely different to rural areas; it is crowded, polluted, and noisy. Therefore, if someone can not face these difficulties, they should not move to the city.
To solve these difficulties as mentioned above, government could give some solutions. Firstly, government could support new comers by reducing tax in the first year they come; it enables them to have more money to spend on their living cost. Secondly, government could extend the resident area to mitigate population density, also to have more space for new comers. Finally, government could restrict people from countrified area who come to city only for petty work that it does not supply enough money to them live in the city.
In conclusion, city living has its drawbacks; but if government cares their citizens prospectively, I believe that they can solve these issues and people could live in city easier than before.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00689655172 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69602252502 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2103379618 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379958904345 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128718877328 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947060894238 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238372610293 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125229605697 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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