More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Although cities are usually seen as places of opportunity, there are also many major disadvantages of living in large metropolis. However, I personally think that governments can take more effective measures to facilitate urban life for people.
It cannot be denied that living in a big downtown exerts pernicious impacts upon people in a great number of ways. The first problem that most people have to deal with is higher cost of living in comparison with rural life. They stand higher chances of paying higher prices for transportation, house-renting and even food. Secondly, cities lack a sense of community as people do not even know their neighbors, and it is sometimes described as “concrete jungles ”. Furthermore, locating in urban areas takes higher risks suffering from social problems such as crime , poverty. Finally, the air quality is often poor due to smoke from traffic congestion, which in turn leads to many detrimental problems related to respiratory systems including cough, flu and so on.
On the other hand, there are various steps that governments are able to take to solve this problem. Firstly, authorities should invest more money into affordable buildings for people who have just migrated to the big metropolis. Besides, they should set up more places of interests so that both parents and children in a located neighbor can play together. Furthermore, they have the power to apply prohibition policy for vehicles which exhaust too much fume and promote the use of clean public transports and public systems to reduce air pollution and traffic congestion. Also, governments should move manufacturers or factories to the countryside and small towns to create a balance between these places in a country.
In conclusion, in spite of some drawbacks in big cities, authorities should implement necessary measures to enhance the quality of urban life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87159412256 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63122923588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7046929167 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223877286484 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697798071788 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664170537395 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142966464123 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629405448762 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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