More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
As one of several results of industrialization and modernization, the number of people these days choosing private vehicles as their main transportation has been more prevalent than ever. From my perspective, this tendency is truly worrisome since it may result in several adverse impacts on each individual and society as a whole. Therefore, actions should be taken to tackle this urban hassle
On the one hand, there is a variety of severe effects that the excessive dependence on private means of transportation may bring. One outstanding issue that is worth considering is the traffic chaos. It goes without saying the booming in the number of individual cars may beyond the capacity of road infrastructure, which allegedly has insufficient up-gradation. By the ways of exemplifying, roads in developing countries are often constructed centuries ago, thereby, suffering from deterioration and unable for such great volume of traffic. Furthermore, the increasing number of private automobilist is synonymous with the escalating in emissions discharged into the environment. An illustration of this is the rising in temperature at the global scale as a corresponding consequence of over-reliance on private transportation
Unfortunately, there is no easy answer to the problem of over-dependence on cars. Nevertheless, there is certain measures that can be taken into consideration. The first and foremost methods to raise public awareness about the detrimental influence of private vehicles on the surrounding environment. This can be a very beginning step for encouraging citizens to have a go at more eco-friendly means of transportation including bicycle or walking or at least public transports. It does not seem unreasonable to claim that this method is not only advantageous to the environment but its beneficial impacts on people's well-being both physically and psychologically are unparalleled
In conclusion, the excessive usage of private cars may result in traffic congestion as well as the degradation of environmental condition. One suggestion for this is to raise public awareness about the pernicious impacts of cars in order to encourage people to use more earthy friend transportations
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, at least, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61194029851 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56676573057 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8212569754 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.615384615 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268342066634 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824350586848 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718757699718 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158117713166 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422436229396 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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