More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

The number of students pursuing higher education has increased manifold. Many of them are preferring to study abroad due to availability of better opportunities and a multicultural society. This essay will describe evidence on how studying in foreign country is more beneficial than studying at home.

Most of the top universities in the world are located in highly developed countries. Because, to keep up a higher standard of education, one have to spend a lot of money and certainly, rich countries have plenty of it. In addition to it, scholarly students and celebrated professors are choosing these colleges and universities as these will give them better facilities, more research budget and higher social status. For these reasons, the number of international students are increasing. These institutions not only provide them with creative environment to nourish their potentials but also dare them to dream big which is even further facilitated by institutional mentors with incredible credentials and help them reach the pinnacle of success within a very short time. moreover, better jobs, brighter future, safer environment are among the most prominent contributing factors behind the increase in number of foreign students in world-class institutions.

Although, for some, studying abroad mean studying away from family, friends and relatives, which is one of the major setback faced by foreign student. Even then, the facilities provided by the international institutions along with the possibility of getting permanent resident-ship in near future surpass this hurdle.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...on has increased manifold. Many of them are preferring to study abroad due to availability of ...
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Line 5, column 775, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...le of success within a very short time. moreover, better jobs, brighter future, safer en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07702056469 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8086009575 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244854276652 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867775907751 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901005113014 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178746286796 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776465640074 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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