More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

The number of students pursuing higher education has increased manifold. Many of them are preferring to study abroad due to availability of better opportunities and a multicultural society. This essay will describe evidence on how studying in foreign country is more beneficial than studying at home.

Most of the top universities in the world are located in highly developed countries. Because, to keep up a higher standard of education, one have to spend a lot of money and certainly, rich countries have plenty of it. In addition to it, scholarly students and celebrated professors are choosing these colleges and universities as these will give them better facilities, more research budget and higher social status. For these reasons, the number of international students are increasing. These institutions not only provide them with creative environment to nourish their potentials but also dare them to dream big which is even further facilitated by institutional mentors with incredible credentials and help them reach the pinnacle of success within a very short time. moreover, better jobs, brighter future, safer environment are among the most prominent contributing factors behind the increase in number of foreign students in world-class institutions.

Although, for some, studying abroad mean studying away from family, friends and relatives, which is one of the major setback faced by foreign student. Even then, the facilities provided by the international institutions along with the possibility of getting permanent resident-ship in near future surpass this hurdle.

In conclusion, there are certain drawbacks in studying abroad but a huge research funding along with world-class mentors, state of art labs and a vibrant culture provided by the educational body outweigh such disadvantages.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 5, column 775, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...le of success within a very short time. moreover, better jobs, brighter future, safer en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6496350365 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09259141983 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3128308528 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275393806171 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905964352307 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087189523041 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167210646158 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701495166871 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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