More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
There is a school of thought that more and more wild animals nowadays are on the verge of extinction and the endangered list is changed from time to time with many names have been increasingly written on this such as dinosaur, panda,... Nevertheless, its impact on the natural environment brings much controversial debate based on the dropping rate of those type of creature. This essay will elaborate both reason and the ways relating to "how can we solve these problems ?" from a cultural perspective.
Hunting the rare creature is undisputedly one of main arrow for getting a great amount of money on this type of social world at present. The first reason to support it is that despite those kinds of activities were illegal and governments around the world have brought it into the global law, no one can reject the benefits which were produced by selling the body of endangered animal. To illustrate, we can see from many rich hunters in Africa, a country which is infamous for the proportion of rare beast, are holding a plan of hunting and trading lots of parts of animal's body on a regular basis. Therefore, according to all of these aforementioned reasons, the activities of killing endangered species is one of the fastest ways to gain a great deal of finance for their life.
On the other hand, if we want to deal with this significant problem's type of wild world at present, we should probably get some imagination of plan which any inhabitant on Earth can do to solve it. Actually, those illegal acts have been a contentious conversation from many centuries ago, and human beings still did not have the effective direction to resolve all of question. Hence, the particular method to deal with this is that holding the voice of yourself to change the conception of their hunter, or taking more funds to improve the organisation such as CIA, global police, spy corporation,... in order to plump the number of illegal companies with regard to the activities of trading parts of rare creature's body, as well as the government's finance of guarding species.
In a nutshell, it seems to me that the main direction to solve all of this unlawful acts is the way that we plan to change the brain's conception of all people on Earth today.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brains'' or 'brain's'?
Suggestion: brains'; brain's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81025641026 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72137664818 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515384615385 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6409000375 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255516314681 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828781036325 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751346159127 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149624551995 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801245919967 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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