More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem?
Human development has many facets. With the advent of colonisation and urbanisation, the many forests have been cut down to make space for concrete jungles. As a result, wild animals are on the brink of extinction and many more are categorised as endangered species.
A recent study showed that 40% of the animal species are listed as endangered species. A species is endangered if either the predators have increased in number, or loss of habitat or due to climatic conditions. Poaching and hunting have resulted in many gruesome deaths of animals. Elephant tusks, leather and rabbit fur are sold for millions in the black market.
Loss of habitat and changing climatic conditions have further deteriorated the situation. For instance, the melting of the polar ice caps has rendered the polar bears homeless. Global warming has resulted in many deaths and pollution has been choking the marine life. The great pacific patch of plastic has been causing ingestion and fatality in aquatic life.
An effective solution for poaching would be to impose strict rules and heavy criminal penalties against poachers. Also, setting up of national parks and sanctuaries would be beneficial to protect the flora and fauna of the region. Breeding activity should be closely monitored and modified to ensure survival of the species.
Regular monitoring of the animal clan will prove effective in regulating their numbers. Animals on the brink of extinction should be protected with national laws. A combined effort from the people and the governments can ensure animal safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3187250996 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67778879831 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2180963438 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5294117647 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170708540936 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500715186182 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062592234453 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878713891168 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04533163797 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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