In most countries, prison is an effective solution for the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been much discussions closely associate with the issue which is more necessary, some people widely acceptable that we should focus on developing education system instead of solving violation problems by using prison. However, I stand for the opposite site and totally believe that prison plays an crucial role in social to eliminate all of evil social, it could explained by two factors: prison is a safe place to keep crime for social security, the development of education can not totally intercede to violent behaviors
Firstly, it is evidently reasonable to argue that prison is an indispensable part of social security. To start with, prison is an high security area to keep people who have any actions broken the laws, besides that, the dangerous criminal such as murder, rapists all of whom have to be imprisoned. As for these reasons, firstly prison is really important to ensure the safety for others people. What is more, prison sentences plays a crucial key to chastise crimes. Time in the cell help crimes to review and recognize their mistakes and think more positive to get a better life after prisoning. According to a research of the Guardian, at least 80% crimes recognize their illegal action and go down the path after life in cell. After that, prison is a necessary method to solve the problem of crime.
Secondly, investing to education system can not affect completely to decrease the number of criminality. In fact, education only help students to improve their awareness about ethical issue, which can not affect to the outbursts action. To point out, when people drink a lot, they usually can not control their perspective and violent actions so the fight or massacre can happens whenever. Besides, educations only play the role to mention about the penalty levels of difference illegal actions. Given these point, the problem of crime could be decrease because of education growth, however, education do not have radical impact on keep safety for citizen and strong impact on crime handling.
To sum up, having cited reason above, I firmly that the investment of prison is the plausible solution to solve thoroughly crime problems and keep safety life. Doubtlessly, I suggest that crime handling with imprisonment sentences is essential along with educational development as the society today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, as for, at least, in fact, such as, to start with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12860892388 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60757423224 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2954544168 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.266666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196607528298 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643860036534 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461916093718 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118051324516 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454061742535 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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