Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays people are not concerned about the traditional and religious festival, they do not celebrate it as they used to celebrate in the past. Instead they enjoy with themselves only. There are various factors which affects habits of people and some of them are included in the paragraph. The traditions and festivals are fading away as people are considering it as a formality only, people should focus on celebrating with everybody. I believe that festivals are meant to celebrate in unity.
The era of technology affects highly on the thinking and mentality of people. Most people are usually engaged in their mobile phones , taking photos rather than enjoying festival. For instance, Christmas is the festival in which everyone should gather and pray for the Jesus Christ together, but nowadays people are enjoying by watching it on a television rather than going to church. Moreover, people are wishing each other over mobile phones rather than meeting physically. These habits are shame for festival itself.
The education also plays an important role for teaching about festivals to children and adults. Most schools do not educate children about the basic festival and tradition of their culture. Even the adults do not know the deep knowledge of festival, they don't know what things to be done during the festivals like going to the church or temples. Consequently, lack of awareness in children as well adults regarding festivals lead to the lost meaning of the festival. Meanwhile, they end up celebrating in their home only.
In conclusion, the true meaning of festival can be explained, if people do not merge technology with festivals, and by getting more aware about their own festivals and traditions. I strongly agree with the statement that people are celebrating festivals with themselves only and not getting social with everybody. In some way, the word festival also means gathering and celebrating together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
... as they used to celebrate in the past. Instead they enjoy with themselves only. There ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e usually engaged in their mobile phones , taking photos rather than enjoying fest...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... than going to church. Moreover, people are wishing each other over mobile phones rather th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ow the deep knowledge of festival, they dont know what things to be done during the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2347266881 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68540017427 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2375076542 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289844718866 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897371715391 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624136167198 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178958960786 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560837677186 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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