New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is proposed that buyers are experiencing remarkable transformation brought about by the state-of-the-art technological advances and innovative means of purchasing and selling goods. In my opinion, I completely agree with this suggestion.
Firstly, as an increasing number of stores are providing online shopping services, consumers get to experience a wide range of benefits. Based on the information on these web-based facilities, people can preview the products and compare their prices from various sources more easily than by visiting store by store. This, I believe, allows buyers to make better informed shopping decisions. While many suggest that there are fake websites aiming to exploit buyers’ financial resources, I believe that they can be avoided when buyers are supplied with sufficient knowledge and skills regarding checking a website’s credibility using tools and feedbacks available online.
Secondly, by shopping electronically, consumers will also get to avoid the trouble of travelling to the shops, which on the large scale, may help to reduce traffic. For instance, they can place an online order of the desired products and pay a small fee to get their goods delivered right at their front door. Opposers of this idea present a counter-argument citing the correlation between transportation for delivery and its consequential contribution to the worsening of traffic. However, I believe that consumers crowd the roads in an effort to get to their shopping paradise can still leave a much more detrimental net impact and thus, should be avoided.
Thirdly, by integrating digital banking with shopping, members of society can also shrugg off the worries of getting robbed. Instead of carrying a lot of cash, buyers can use credit cards or special codes to pay for their goods. In spite of the theory hypothesizing store staffs attempting to steal their customers’ personal information during their transactions’ procedures, I think that a large proportion of buyers will enjoy the new convenient methods of payment while the owners of the shops actively handle problems related to their employees’ work ethics.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that remarkable positive changes have been made to buyer’s lives owing to the application of pristine cutting-edge technological breakthroughs in shopping practices.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65083798883 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26564985288 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5971835656 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084811197373 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381792685877 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608789048487 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676684551836 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764665578857 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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