The news media have become too much influence in people lives today
and this is a negative development? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a growing recognition that individuals in these days has increasingly reliant on news media. Some people argue that this phenomenon causes drawbacks for society. However I am of opinion that despite of its disadvantages, benefits of news media are indisputable concern in the modern world.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that prevalence of news technology makes positive contribution for every individual nowadays. The first reason in favor of this point is that with enormous development of science and technology, this requires individuals in terms of enrichment of their know how via updated news on daily basis. In fact, to be global citizens, people need to acquire the large amount of information on international events through BBC or CNN news, this is beneficial for them to permeating on global lifestyles such as seeking overseas job. Second thing is that ubiquity of information via media allows people to access crucial news instantly in order to prevent the risks accidentally. There is a clear evidence for this is that when typhoons or hurricanes occur suddenly, news media plays vital role in delivering this announcement for all citizens. As a result, thanks to assistance from social media such as TV, cell phone or internet- based devices, devastating impacts of possession or human can be minimum.
One the other hand, there are some reasons as to why news media brings adverse influences on certain circumstances. Initially, it is not usual that individuals encounter difficulties in searching accurate information due to tremendous amount of data surveyed daily via news media. It is obvious that some informal or uncensored websites disseminate misleading information. Finally popularity of news media in recent years has made disappearance of traditional means. It is common that people is no longer to read newspapers or magazines on earlier mornings. As a consequences, reading culture will be suffered in the year heads. Because youngsters have tendency to listening or watching via news media this gain more and more interested on these days.
In conclusion, it seems to me that overdependence on news media has caused detrimental influences on community. However, advantages of this problem should be considered deliberately due to its effectiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34986225895 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12811342678 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592286501377 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4723948111 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220866227634 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688088899954 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378491930244 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138848333224 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017324343306 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.