Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?

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Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?

With the rise in technological advancement, business meetings and training method are changing sharply with the passage of time. Most of the meetings and training are happening via Internet than face to face.This has both benefits and drawbacks and I will discuss in my upcoming paragraphs.
The first step to understand, what are the advantages of training and business seminars on online mode?First and foremost benefit is that staff feel more comfortable and they properly managed their precious time. Similarly, they got rid of their all unnecessary Worries and tensions and staff increase their work efficiency. A best epitome of this is mothers who have busy schedule and love to do jobs they can get vast amount of help from internet and make their career better. Likewise, online procedure are no much expensive and this will help in maintaining the economy level of the company.
However, it is truly said, no rose without Thrones. There are also some drawbacks.Fistly, communication via Internet have a lot of difficulties such as: flow of information,crash of connection. Moreover, people can't get good training from internet because people cannot apply the method properly which they are learned from Internet. Furthermore, in many countries people cannot afford high-speed internet connection such as: kena and South Africa. so due to this people from poor Nations prefer real offices than online mode.
Nevertheless, weighing both the pros and cons there some advantages for participating in meetings and seminars. but, apart from this, there are also some drawbacks which cannot be neglected.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, apart from, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34251968504 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92233409796 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8161455164 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179476759289 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576392095755 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415092841494 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101286391697 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288123223698 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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